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PostSubject: Poetry! :D   Mon Apr 14, 2008 2:51 pm

Post your poetry here! I'll start by posting mine! I'm warning you, I don't think they're good. I wrote these when I was 17 lol They're short and corny, I think. BUt I'll post them anyway....*blushes*

Tears

Tears fall when we feel sad
They might even fall when we're mad
We try to hold them back
That's something some of us lack
They fall when we don't want them to
Like when people are standing right in front of you
Tears fall when pain gets in the way
Or when we don't know what to say
Tears even fall from the sky
Because that's what happens when angels cry

By: ~*Ashley Lynn~*


Where did you go?

Where did you go?
I guess that's something I'll never know
Did I do something wrong?
I knew you'd leave before too long
Why did you have to leave me?
It feels like my best friend just deceived me
What could I do to get you back?
Tell me what it is that I lack
All I want to know is where you went
Because without you
I feel all broken and bent

By: ~*Ashley Lynn~*


Friends

A friend is someone who shows they care
A friend is someone who's always there
They'll cheer you up if you're blue
Even if you don't want them to
A friend believes in you
A friend is always true
So don't let your friends slip away
Because someday, you might pay
If sometimes you don't know how to deal
A friend knows how to keep it real

By: ~*Ashley Lynn~*


Love

Love is something you can't describe
Love is something you feel inside
You can't live without it
Don't try to doubt it
You live with it everyday
Don't try to push it away
Love is the greatest feeling around
So don't just leave it on the ground
Instead, just pick it up and pass it around

By: ~*Ashley Lynn~*

Also, a song my friend Shane made OUT of my poems (This I like, cuz he added some of his stuff to it, He writes songs and music, I LOVE his stuff. Very Happy )

When Angels Cry

Verse 1
Tears fall when we feel sad
They might even fall when we're mad
We try to hold them back
That's something some of us lack
They fall when we don't want them to
Like when people are right in front of you
Tears fall when pain gets in the way
Or when we don't know what to say

Where did you go?
Where did you go?
What did I do wrong?
I guess that's something I'll never know

Chorus
Why do angels cry?
Why do tears fall from the sky?
Somewhere amidst the rain
I know there's hope in you
Why do angels cry?
Why does my heart refuse to shine?
Because that's what happens when angels cry

Verse 2
I knew you'd leave before too long
Why did you have to go?
It feels like my best friend deceived me
What is it that I don't know?
How can I get you back?
Tell me what it is that I lack
All I want to know is where you went
Because without you
I feel broken and bent

Where did you go?
Where did you go?
What did I do wrong?
I guess that's something I'll never know

Chorus
Why do angels cry?
Why do tears fall from the sky?
Somewhere amidst the rain
I know there's hope in you
Why do angels cry?
Why does my heart refuse to shine?
Because that's what happens when angels cry

Bridge
A friend is someone who shows they care
A friend is someone who's always there
They'll cheer you up if you're blue
Even if you don't want them to
A friend believes in you
And is always true

Where did you go?
Where did you go?
What did I do wrong?
I guess that's something I'll never know

Chorus
Why do angels cry?
Why do tears fall from the sky?
Somewhere amidst the rain
I know there's hope in you
Why do angels cry?
Why does my heart refuse to shine?
Because that's what happens when angels cry
When angels cry
When angels cry
When angels cry

It ended too fast
But the memories are what make it last
It's too bad we didn't run
I'm not the only one who saw love.

By: Shane L. McMillan and ~*Ashley Lynn~*
Very Happy

Oh, one more thing! I TOTALLY didn't draw this but I put my poem on it and I dedicate this to all my MJJ friends! I love you guys! Very Happy


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PostSubject: Re: Poetry! :D   Mon Apr 14, 2008 2:54 pm

These are wonderful! So heartfelt I love them!

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PostSubject: Re: Poetry! :D   Mon Apr 14, 2008 3:02 pm

Awww thanks Laura! Embarassed (thats a blush, not embarrassed lol) Very Happy

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PostSubject: Re: Poetry! :D   Mon Apr 14, 2008 3:04 pm

OMG those are so GOOD!! I love them!
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PostSubject: Re: Poetry! :D   Mon Apr 14, 2008 3:06 pm

Wow your poetry is awesome!

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PostSubject: Re: Poetry! :D   Mon Apr 14, 2008 3:08 pm

Awww thanks Coco and Cathy! Embarassed Embarassed *hugs you all* Very Happy

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PostSubject: Re: Poetry! :D   Mon Apr 14, 2008 5:14 pm

Wow! Great Poetry.
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PostSubject: Re: Poetry! :D   Mon Apr 14, 2008 10:35 pm

Thanks! Very Happy Hugs

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PostSubject: Re: Poetry! :D   Tue Apr 15, 2008 3:24 am

omg i love those ! What/OMG
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PostSubject: Re: Poetry! :D   Tue Apr 15, 2008 11:47 am

Thanks Coco! Love ya! Love

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PostSubject: Re: Poetry! :D   Tue Apr 15, 2008 4:53 pm

Helloo. This poem is based off the song "Human Nature" I didn't know what human nature meant, so I did research, disected the song and came up with a poem for my findings. It's a little rough and not my best, but Oh well.


Love is like a flower
That blossoms in the day
Why must I fall in love with him
Why must I act this way.
God controls human nature
Human nature, it is.
Uncontrollable, emotional
Human nature, it is.

We live, breathe, think, die
Something that can't be taught.
Human nature. Complex? It's not.
Learning is our becoming.
Human nature. Easy? It's not.
It is our forthcoming.

Asking questions and exploring
It's what we naturally do.
Wanting companionship
or behaving this way.
Don't tell me it's not true.

God only knows
can only tell
what human nature is.
Desirable, unrelyable
Human nature, it is.

- Arielle W.
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PostSubject: Re: Poetry! :D   Wed Apr 16, 2008 12:55 am

Gyus I loooove your poems!!!!!
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PostSubject: Re: Poetry! :D   Wed Apr 16, 2008 3:05 am

Arielle that was GREAT! I loved it! Very Happy

And thank you Stranger In Greece! Very Happy

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PostSubject: Re: Poetry! :D   Wed Apr 16, 2008 5:33 am

oh my god, guys, your poems are awesome!! they are so sweet Wink



okay, I love poems but I am not that good in writing them heres my best (it sucks)Ditto 1
theres a hidden key
in a hidden place
a key that opens my heart
a key that opens my sole
so you can see every thing inside
every thing hidden
every thing written
all my notes
and all my hopes
all my cries
and all my lies
all my fears
and all my tears
help me find the key
the key of my heart
the key of my sole!


Thanx!!









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PostSubject: Re: Poetry! :D   Wed Apr 16, 2008 5:53 am

Wow everyone's poems are so good! Thumbs Up

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PostSubject: Re: Poetry! :D   Wed Apr 16, 2008 2:05 pm

Woww! That was really good Stranger in Florida. It doesn't suck at all. Smile
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PostSubject: Re: Poetry! :D   Wed Apr 16, 2008 4:02 pm

Stranger in Florida, that didn't suck at all! I LOVED it! Very Happy

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PostSubject: Re: Poetry! :D   Wed Apr 16, 2008 4:33 pm

Lots of talented poets here! cheer

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PostSubject: Re: Poetry! :D   Thu Apr 17, 2008 12:25 am

More poems please! Very Happy

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PostSubject: Re: Poetry! :D   Sun Apr 20, 2008 11:40 am

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PostSubject: Re: Poetry! :D   Sun Apr 20, 2008 1:39 pm

omg...love it!!!
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PostSubject: Re: Poetry! :D   Sun Apr 20, 2008 1:40 pm

StrangerInOntario wrote:
Helloo. This poem is based off the song "Human Nature" I didn't know what human nature meant, so I did research, disected the song and came up with a poem for my findings. It's a little rough and not my best, but Oh well.


Love is like a flower
That blossoms in the day
Why must I fall in love with him
Why must I act this way.
God controls human nature
Human nature, it is.
Uncontrollable, emotional
Human nature, it is.

We live, breathe, think, die
Something that can't be taught.
Human nature. Complex? It's not.
Learning is our becoming.
Human nature. Easy? It's not.
It is our forthcoming.

Asking questions and exploring
It's what we naturally do.
Wanting companionship
or behaving this way.
Don't tell me it's not true.

God only knows
can only tell
what human nature is.
Desirable, unrelyable
Human nature, it is.

- Arielle W.
omg thats so great *tears*
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PostSubject: Re: Poetry! :D   Fri May 02, 2008 4:27 pm

Come on y'all, I know you have more poems! Share! Very Happy

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